If you've spotted an error in Darkness Surrounding (and it sounds like all of you have found a few), please let me know. I'd like to release a second edition with corrections as soon as possible.
I am aware that I did not capitalize "The Rev" in Chapter Three, and that I put "dinking" instead of "sinking" when Zanni and Garr are playing basketball. There are also some dashes that do not appear correctly (--). Keep in mind that the correctness of some punctuation/language may be a matter of opinion, and that my dialect may be different from yours (especially if you are located overseas).
Please leave a page number and describe the error. Thanks!
Oho right :) well yeah, I think it was something like:
- why -,
Something like that... I'm not much help.
Page 135, it should say "Then why-" not, "They why"...